From 9bc3f540381cd2702709a52acae3a90e70f23746 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Steffen Ritter Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2023 15:39:29 +0100 Subject: Try to harmonize wording + fix some typos en: satellite server de: Satellitenserver --- satellit_installer/documentation/satellit_installer | 8 ++++---- satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue | 2 +- satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue.disabled | 2 +- .../static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstboot.sh | 2 +- satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstrun.sh | 2 +- satellit_upgrader/updater.template.sh | 10 +++++----- 6 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/satellit_installer/documentation/satellit_installer b/satellit_installer/documentation/satellit_installer index 20ee482..db16e58 100644 --- a/satellit_installer/documentation/satellit_installer +++ b/satellit_installer/documentation/satellit_installer @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ An automated installation script for bwLehrpool satellite server 1. Preface -The satellite_installer script automatically installs a bwLehrpool satellite +The satellit_installer script automatically installs a bwLehrpool satellite server on top of a naked Linux OS. Currently supported is Debian 7.5 wheezy. It may also work on other Debian based Linux systems as long as packages @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ any system services so you can (and should!) keep your server always up to date. Please remember that a database entry in the master server is needed for any satellite server to function, as the bwSuite clients will first connect to the -master server which will forward connecting clients via username resoltuion to +master server which will forward connecting clients via username resolution to an appropriate satellite server. Or, in other words: If this master server database entry is missing, your satellite server will never see any connect. @@ -64,12 +64,12 @@ any needed system packages and helper files needed to function. So: 1. change into the script directory (.../setup-scripts/satellit_installer). -2. Start the script: ./satellite-installer +2. Start the script: ./satellit-installer 3. Read script output for eventual warnings. 4. Log out and re-log in to trigger the dropped script, or simply reboot and re-login (a reboot is not quite necessary, but will not hurt either) 5. At the end of the dropped script choose 'y' to reboot, or do some other - stuff, as long as you do not forget to reboot prior using the Satellite. + stuff, as long as you do not forget to reboot prior using the satellite. 4. What to do if the script has thrown any errors? diff --git a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue index 2a0945d..a097cee 100644 --- a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue +++ b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ ------------------------------------------------- - bwLehrpool Satellite Server (Debian \S{VERSION_ID}) + bwLehrpool Satellitenserver (Debian \S{VERSION_ID}) ------------------------------------------------- Bitte loggen Sie sich als Nutzer "bwlp" ein, um die diff --git a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue.disabled b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue.disabled index 857ec97..078ef2a 100644 --- a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue.disabled +++ b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/etc/issue.disabled @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ ------------------------------------------------- - bwLehrpool Satellite Server (Debian \S{VERSION_ID}) + bwLehrpool Satellitenserver (Debian \S{VERSION_ID}) ------------------------------------------------- Web interface for configuration: diff --git a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstboot.sh b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstboot.sh index 04f5e93..fe75c1d 100755 --- a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstboot.sh +++ b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstboot.sh @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ ssh-keygen -q -N "" -f "$KEY" \ # Write MOTD cat > /etc/motd < *** bwLehrpool Satelliten-Server, Version $VERSION *** +> *** bwLehrpool Satellitenserver, Version $VERSION *** > Eingerichtet am $(date) > > Wenn Sie sich als 'bwlp' eingeloggt haben, haben Sie nun folgende Optionen: diff --git a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstrun.sh b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstrun.sh index 80e235c..b4c6ba2 100755 --- a/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstrun.sh +++ b/satellit_installer/static_files/system/opt/openslx/firstrun.sh @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ cat <<-HEREDOC > -> Willkommen zur Grundkonfiguration des bwLehrpool-Satellitenservers. +> Willkommen zur Grundkonfiguration des bwLehrpool Satellitenservers. > > Diese einmalige Konfiguration dient dazu, das Passwort des System-Users > "bwlp" zu ändern (für Terminal, SSH), sowie ggf. die diff --git a/satellit_upgrader/updater.template.sh b/satellit_upgrader/updater.template.sh index 31e7cc6..85066dd 100644 --- a/satellit_upgrader/updater.template.sh +++ b/satellit_upgrader/updater.template.sh @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ [ "x$1" != "x--exec-self" ] && exec /bin/bash "$0" --exec-self "$@" if [ ! -d "/opt/dmsd" ] && [ ! -d "/srv/openslx/www/slx-admin" ]; then - echo "This system doesn't look like a bwLehrpool Satellite Server" + echo "This system doesn't look like a bwLehrpool satellite server" echo "(Or this updater is really old)" exit 1 fi @@ -53,13 +53,13 @@ if [[ "$(uname -m)" == i?86 ]]; then fi if (( MAJOR < 9 )); then - echo "This Version of the bwLehrpool Satellite Server is too old!" + echo "This Version of the bwLehrpool satellite server is too old!" echo "Back up your existing configuration via slx-admin and import it into a" echo "fresh install, or manually dist-upgrade this server." exit 1 fi if (( MAJOR > 12 )); then - echo "This Version of the bwLehrpool Satellite Server is too new!" + echo "This Version of the bwLehrpool satellite server is too new!" exit 1 fi if (( MAJOR == 9 )); then @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ daemon_reload= if [ -n "$TGZ_SLXADMIN" ]; then declare -rg CURRENT_WEBIF_VERSION="$( < "${PATH_SLXADMIN}/version" tail -n 1 )" # Print state of affairs - echo "bwLehrpool Satellite Server Update" + echo "bwLehrpool satellite server update" echo -n "Currently installed version: " sed -r 's/([0-9]{4})([0-9]{3})([0-9]{2})/\1-\2-\3/' <<<"$CURRENT_WEBIF_VERSION" echo -n "This update package: " @@ -940,7 +940,7 @@ for i in /opt/openslx/restore.d/*/init.sh; do done # Patch the update version in /etc/motd -sed -r -i 's/(bwLehrpool Satelliten-Server, Version[^[(*]*)\s*([[(]Update.*[])])?\s*/\1 [Update: '"${SLXADMIN_FOOTER}"'] /g' /etc/motd +sed -r -i 's/(bwLehrpool Satelliten[-sS]*erver, Version[^[(*]*)\s*([[(]Update.*[])])?\s*/\1 [Update: '"${SLXADMIN_FOOTER}"'] /g' /etc/motd echo "" echo "Update complete. This update needs a reboot to be working as intended. Please do so now." -- cgit v1.2.3-55-g7522